My Beautiful Love

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By IdeaMorphist

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My Beautiful Love

Like raindrops on petals

or clouds painted in the sky


The waves crashing on sand

and ripples on a quiet pond


The gentle breeze rustling a trees leaves

or birds early morning chirp greetings


A friendship of two is gorgeous

and our link seems more obvious each day


As two grow to the ultimate closeness

they will get to the same point, and all time will stop


All noise will be gone

No site of anything but each other


Sight and sound not needed to be aware of the beauty around

Because we will see it in each other

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elayne001 Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago

That is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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mythbuster Level 3 Commenter 19 months ago

Very nice. Just letting the words sink in. I don't know why I insist on commenting on hubs with poems 'cos my brain takes so long to get out of "metaphoria" (metaphor-euphoria?) and I can't express myself well at all after reading poems lmao

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billyaustindillon Level 2 Commenter 22 months ago

What a touching love poem - so beautifully expressed.

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KoffeeKlatch Gals Level 6 Commenter 23 months ago

You are very poetic. It's wonderful to have a love so strong. I look forward to reading more of your hubs.

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dracaslair 23 months ago

its good to know you get to love someone that you want to love.

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Lita C. Malicdem Level 4 Commenter 23 months ago

Marvelous expression of the love-bond you two are in! May you stay as sweet forever. Love it!

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