My Beautiful Love
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My Beautiful Love
Like raindrops on petals
or clouds painted in the sky
The waves crashing on sand
and ripples on a quiet pond
The gentle breeze rustling a trees leaves
or birds early morning chirp greetings
A friendship of two is gorgeous
and our link seems more obvious each day
As two grow to the ultimate closeness
they will get to the same point, and all time will stop
All noise will be gone
No site of anything but each other
Sight and sound not needed to be aware of the beauty around
Because we will see it in each other
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Very nice. Just letting the words sink in. I don't know why I insist on commenting on hubs with poems 'cos my brain takes so long to get out of "metaphoria" (metaphor-euphoria?) and I can't express myself well at all after reading poems lmao
What a touching love poem - so beautifully expressed.
You are very poetic. It's wonderful to have a love so strong. I look forward to reading more of your hubs.
its good to know you get to love someone that you want to love.
Marvelous expression of the love-bond you two are in! May you stay as sweet forever. Love it!






elayne001 Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago
That is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.